[Mehrbod]

mehrpad, do we need to always speak English in the right way even while talking?
explain me what kind of mistakes does the English usually make?
and also correct my mistakes in here... because 2 next month I will be in FCE and I am serious about my power in writing
I would like to use words from old English !
like using of a lot. or genetive like Cyrus The Great or The bag my mother instead of my mother's bag which I think is wrong at all xD
in german we can use such things.
and please write British as much as you can,as you know I dislike american's language albeit it's very useful. I prefer British form.
another question.
is this sentence wrong
?
much that once was is lost,for none now live who remember it.
its not wrong grammatically but why? its somehow one kind of Old English or what?
thank you very much indeed!

انگلیشگر

First of all, it's Mehrbod, not Mehrpad; is there something wrong with your eyes my friend? :)

Secondly, the phrase "much that once was is lost, for none now live who remember it." is definitely right, but it's poetical and would roughly be translated into: "Az dast berafte farâvân ânce ruzgâri bud, ke nun mabâšad hickas kân yâdâvarad. / از دست برفته فراوان آنچه روزْگاری بود, که نون مباشد هیچکس کآن یادآورد."

Lastly, your english is rather acceptable, you just need to speak a lot more and get it all straightened up.