[Mehrbod]

All right! I write about whom that I know him more than the others. So, please debug my writing on any aspects carefully! Also it is clear that this writing is unformal and for exercise only.


So my target is you:
Mehrbod; the person who which is diligent,playful, and hooked* on this forum!
He has a good Social relationships and he has respected by the others. Mehrbod learns us the words of Persian language in his every posts, which this is very good. I think he has studied a lot to learn true Persian. Moreover his scientific personality is remarkable. ‌But I think he can write more wisely than what he has been writing now.
Based on wrote on the top; he is hooked on this forum and often he is online; so I'm gazing for him about his pay attention to more important works in his life!
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* its an unformal term: a person who pay to something exorbitancy.

Hey Rationalism, thanks for the analysis :)

Firstly I'll go ahead and correct some of your grammar:

All right! I write about whom that I know [strike]him[/strike] more than the others. So, please debug my writing on [strike]any[/strike] all aspects carefully! Also it is clear that this writing is informal and for exercise only.


So my target is you:
Mehrbod; the person who [strike]which[/strike] is diligent,playful, and hooked* on this forum!
He has [strike]a[/strike] good Social relationships and he has [strike]respected by the others[/strike] earned the respect of others. Mehrbod [strike]learns[/strike] teaches us the words of Persian language in his every post[strike]s[/strike], which this is very good. I think he has studied a lot to learn true Persian. Moreover his [strike]scientific[/strike] science-oriented personality is remarkable. ‌But I think he can write more wisely than what he has been writing [strike]now[/strike] so far.

Based on what I wrote on the top; he is hooked on this forum and [strike]often[/strike] he is often online; so I'm [strike]gazing[/strike] looking for him [strike]about his pay attention[/strike] wishing he would pay attention to more important work[strike]s[/strike] in his life!
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* it's an informal term: a person who pays attention to something [strike]exorbitancy[/strike] exorbitantly.

I also much appreciate what you said about my personality and also using my time more wisely. However on that, I don't believe in hard work or anything remotely alike, I rather like doing 'nothing' most of the time, followed by short bursts of real hard work.
Over the years I've come to believe that it's how we've been evolved to live & work as human beings, other approaches (i.e. working hard) won't work in the long-run.